My family is composed of 5 people, Jose my father, Sonia my mother, Raul my brother and Frankie my little brother. I live in Guanica, Puerto Rico. I have 20 years. My hobby is work and try to always smile to life.
As much as you want in life is to finish study and become a great professional in life, besides making money for the future and have many good things. My family is what I love most in this world especially my brothers. I hope God gives me the time I need to grow and be a great health care and education spending my limits. After a family to provide whatever is needed to live this life that today is hard for everyone. Finally my family and friends are very special because they are the reason for my existence.
You need to rewrite your paragraph. The assignment was to write about family and/or friends. You started off fine but then you focused on writing about yourself. Tell us about your family. You still have time to do the corrections.....until Sept. 30.
ReplyDeleteCorrection....you have until October 7.
ReplyDeleteMy family is composed of 5 people, Jose my father, Sonia my mother, Raul my brother and Frankie my little brother. We live in Guanica, Puerto Rico. My brother Jose was 10 years old, he is very smart. My little brother Frankie was 7 years old and they are so strong. I love so much my family because they are so special with me. My family is what I love most in this world especially my brothers. After a family to provide whatever is needed to live this life that today is hard for everyone. Finally my family and friends are very special because they are the reason for my existence.
ReplyDeleteDo you like to party alot and drinking?
ReplyDeletel really like how you love your family and friend your brother is your twin he really look like you and i like how special they are to you.
ReplyDeleteyes so much...
ReplyDeleteHow does it feel to be the oldest? Do your brothers look up to you?
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